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ok, i'm going to go ahead and jump in the water here....

i have 2 versions of this song...

the first version i've done for several years but i've tried to change it up some....

the 2nd i just got today and i put it in cep w/o listening to it and just went with a first take to see how i'd go with it...

i'd be interested in which version you think is best for me and of course suggestions  and any and all critique is welcome....


here's the link

www.esnips.com/web/songsforcritique/

thanks guys....off to bed now with my pillow firmly over my head 'til it's safe to come out...

Milo,  I'll give this a listen tomorrow and critique it.  I wonder if this is the same sub I heard a few years back,  It was excellent !   I'll give a listen..

BTW..  feel free to sub in the already formed Critique thread.  It's moderated, and it's for all to join in ..

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Well, I'm familiar with the first one and always loved it!  For the new one, I'd say for some reason you sound younger and probably sexier, just what I needed before going to bed

Both excellent my dear, I wish I could sound sexy like you

Both are very well done.  I think I prefer the first one just because it's a little more how I'm used to hearing it done....

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Well Micky, if you sounded sexy like Jeanne you'd not be a man now would ya

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Jeanne I definitely remember your first version and it is truly excellent.  I'll pull up snippers later and give the new one a listen  :hug:

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same song, different sub...i hope it's better than the first time i sang it...

guess i should have posted in the other thread...i thot having a separate thread would be simpler...what do i know?  (no need to answer.... )


you said younger michel?  i'll tell santa to be extra good to you this year....  

thank you kitty for taking the time to listen and comment, really appreciated!  

cathi....

hey darlin...I like your first sing but my comment on the sub on SS stands I dont really like the arrangement of the backing...prefer the snappier spunkier version and if you want it its yours just let me know

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"Be who you are and say what you feel... Because those that matter... Don't mind...And those that mind... Don't matter."

I gotta agree with Vicki Jeanne, I think your first recording had a bit more oomph and sex appeal.  On an up note though on the new one you definitely sound younger

right back atcha sweetie

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ok hon....is the one you have by kylie what's her name?  that's the 2nd version i did, if it's different then yes could you send it?  

ok that's 2 younger comments....gonna have to go with that one i'm thinkin' ....  ;)  thanks sweetums!

Hey young girl, just in case you would like to try another version, here you go:

http://www.esnips.com/doc/e9d043cc-c9c2 ... Santa-Baby

thank you michel....

you know i forgot all about it, (old age) but i'm supposed to be sending you a track....i'll get it off my desktop in a while and send it to ya via myspace....

hope you got the track ok Jeanne

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"Be who you are and say what you feel... Because those that matter... Don't mind...And those that mind... Don't matter."

i did hon....i just checked my mailbox today....duh...

also sent billy's song to ya!  :hug:

Hi Jeanne, yes you are and I still didn't get it  I need to get back at the mic, I'm sooooo rusted

Jeanne,   Sent you a PM regarding the song and what I thought, because I wasn't sure if you were "Sweet pea" in that esnips place *or whatever the place is called*.. (at least I'm pretty certain I sent you a PM).  Did you receive it ?

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yes i am what?  old?!  huh?   ok, michel you have it by now of course....  





yes, steven, just replied, sorry so late in doing so, i've been 'out of the zone' lately...thanks again!

PM back Jeanne !  No critique,  just a fine job !  I can't really add anything constructive I feel would improve this,  it's excellent as is IMHO.. Preferred this rendition to your first and the first was excellent.  Good work !  No Fluff at all,  just excellent work, and as to who likes what.. Again,  subjective.. all in style preference. I prefer this style,  some might like the first..

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Northeast United States runner up for the "Singing Hall of Shame".